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 May 14 2009, 10:45 AM
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Hello all, I'm a designer and new in this forum as you can see...
As designing is a new thing for me,Employee gifts, please review it and comment.your feedback is really important and needed. I designed this website lately and I know it's nice for beginners but I don't really know how to make it better... Thanks in advance |
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May 14 2009, 09:29 PM
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Hi Mr Time
First thing I would do is improve the images. They all look like 256 color GIF. Use a high quality JPG or even better a PNG (which if you take care in compressing can often be smaller). Image quality is vital for a site to look good. Also image consistency is vital. Images need to be same sizes for neatness and where possible similar in style. Try putting a 1px dk grey border around all images. Second (and closer to my heart) is to improve your headline Why not try "Show a gesture of Appreciation to your staff, clients friends and family" in a nice big text style at the top of the content area. Words have more sway over the soul than pictures alone. I know this is a cart but words are still important to set the scene - think of the J Peterman stuff on Seinfeld. Third I would look at the logic of your categories. You are offering feminine products under Men (what bloke wants a gift basket with tea or called Pretty In Pink (unless of course Molly Ringwald is in there)). Think about For Men and For Women. The under $20 is empty - remove that. Don't offer empty sections esp like this and the Coming Soon. Then I would start to look at the template fix the breaks first and then work on a better branding followed by the overall look (remember to keep it simple). That is probably more than you expected but I hope it helps 
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May 16 2009, 12:19 AM
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All in All ok but I have to agree you need to not reduce your gifs to the point of pixelation. I think Benidict sumed it up for you.
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Jun 1 2009, 12:21 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 28 Joined: 5-February 09 Member No.: 5,298 |
I see....I would think about it.....
thanks a lot |
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Feb 9 2010, 03:16 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 1 Joined: 9-February 10 Member No.: 6,019 |
Hi there magic time. I visited your site and like you I also seek the advice of others when it comes to my project website. It really helps to hear the opinion of others, especially those who knows a lot. Anyway, your website is about gifts, gifts are exciting so I think you should improve the color combination of your site to make it more colorful and alive. Multivariate Testing
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